My treehouse is going to be made out of wood. I would have a secret password so me and my friend can go inside my treehouse. My mum can help me built my treehouse.
Inside my treehouse would have a three bedrooms so me and my little sister can sleep in it and my treehouse would have three bathrooms and lots of toilets. My treehouse would also have a tv and have chairs to sit on and my treehouse would have lots of windows in each room.
My treehouse would have a storage where all my food where all my cold food goes and where my fruit and milk and all those other foods. I would go shopping with my mum and aunty and I would buy toilet papper and buy heaps and heaps of food.
My treehouse a couch and have heaps of things and furniter in the treehouse
Well done Irys, you have lots of good ideas for your treehouse. I can tell you were very careful about your sentences in the first paragraph. I would like you to read the other paragraphs in a quiet voice and listen to make sure your sentences only have one or two ideas.
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