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Monday, 17 March 2014

Monday Quick Writes

                                                       What animal would you be.


I would be a  cheetah  because they run fast and they love meat  like me. Cheetah have brown fur and black spots. I love cheetahs  because they have good sents of smell and have cool eyes.

The things that I would do if I was  a cheetahs I would run everyday to be faster than a tiger and a lion.
My diet would be  a  zebra and a kangaroo. Anyways cheetah are my favorite animals. I would eat less everyday if I could.

 Some cheetahs fight sometimes and sometimes fight everyday. Cheetah have sharp teeth like a huge lion. Cheetahs are strong animals and they also have alot of enegry.

I would be a cheetah because they are camourflage. Cheetahs run fast because they smell fear from other animals. Some animals get frighten by lions, cheetahs, tigers and other wild animals that eat other animals.


Monday, 10 March 2014

Monday Quick Writes

My wonderful place that I  been  at is  my aunty's house  at  melbourne. I liked to go there  when I was little. At my aunty's house there was a big tree house I tryed to clime it I could'nt  my cousins could clime the tree house.There house inside was a bit big and there back was tiny bit small.

When I was at my aunty's house I wanted to go at disney world. But my dad  and mum  said no.
My mum and dad and I  went to this very pretty place . It had yummy food. We where so tired because it was a long day my dad booked a hotel to sleep in. We went to the hotel we slept untill it was morning . My dad  just remmber today was our last day at   Melbourne we went to our aunty's house and packed all of our stuff and my aunty and cousins took us to the airport and we said goodbuy. It said our plane was coming this way. My mum and dad and I took our tickets to the lady and My mum and dad and I went on the plane we where on our way to New Zealand.

I have highlighted 3 simple sentence and 3 conjuntions.

Tuesday, 4 March 2014

Monday Quick Writes

                                                         My sandwich



My sandwich is going to have bread ,butter,lettues,chicken,mayonnnaise,cucumber and also  tomato.
I think I am going to  enjoy that sandwich that I just made. I had a bite of my sandwich It tasted delicous I had another bite of  it  and  another bite then I ate it all  and I wanted more  of my sandwich but I  had  no  more

I made a diffrent sandwich.  It had bread, butter, cheese, ham, tomato and cucumber it was  kind of the same as my other one but had diffrent ingredenits. It was'nt that good I liked the first one that  I made before  But I had to eat it all I don't want to wasted it. I  think I was really hungry because I just ate two sandwichs I wanted more.

My mum came home at night and my mum came in my  bedroom and kissed me on my four head . I was just fake sleeping  my mum feel asleep on the couch I  hoped out of bed and made me a  yummy sand wich it had Bread,Butter,Ham,mayonnaise,Lettues.Tomato. My mum woke up and said can you make me one of your sandwichs  because I'm hungry.I said ok mum.I made my mum a sandwich  I was really hungry  it strike one a clock in the morning I was really tired  I made my sandwich  ate I ate it in my room. After I ate my sandwich I  went to bed when I was going to sleep I remember I had school.Then i had a sleep.