My wonderful place that I been at is my aunty's house at melbourne. I liked to go there when I was little. At my aunty's house there was a big tree house I tryed to clime it I could'nt my cousins could clime the tree house.There house inside was a bit big and there back was tiny bit small.
When I was at my aunty's house I wanted to go at disney world. But my dad and mum said no.
My mum and dad and I went to this very pretty place . It had yummy food. We where so tired because it was a long day my dad booked a hotel to sleep in. We went to the hotel we slept untill it was morning . My dad just remmber today was our last day at Melbourne we went to our aunty's house and packed all of our stuff and my aunty and cousins took us to the airport and we said goodbuy. It said our plane was coming this way. My mum and dad and I took our tickets to the lady and My mum and dad and I went on the plane we where on our way to New Zealand.
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It sounds like you had a wonderful time in Melbourne. I haven't been there before. Remember to listen to where the fullstops go when you are writing.
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